سوداء من بعدك

وإن غبت عني للحظة يتخلى قلبي عن الحياة..

فمن بعدك، لن يبقى في عيني نظر،

ولن تسمع أذني لحن أي وتر..

ولن تقبل شفتي أي شفاهٍ أو ثغر..

ولن تتفتح أوراق ورودي والزهر،

ولن تحمل اشجاري أي ثمر..

ولن تطلع شمسي، سيبقى فقط قمر السهر..

قمر سهري، منتظرة،

عودتك يا ربيع قلبي… بعد شتاء باردٍ ،

شتاء، آمل  أن لا يأتي أبداً، بيننا في هذا العمر..

النبطيه في 14/ 10/ 2010

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    • Antoine Alexandros
    • September 15th, 2010

    Doja,
    i liked it!!! true and deep feelings.
    I like also this “full immersion”… If not at this age, when?

    However, i think you have to work out your arabic

    • i believe that we keep on learning as we live, but believe me im good at arabic! and an explanation for that would be great 🙂
      thank you for your precious comment, and advices from ppl like you help me a lot 🙂

  1. Nice poem though i do not usually like it when lovers surrender to their beloved that much 🙂

    • hehehe i guess no one should serrender to no one.. because no one is that trustworthy, but actually when you fall in love, that way, you wouldnt say that.. you can just wish 😀

  2. I like it 😀 very nice, although i like the winter very much…but every person his season 😉

    • thnx nadimI :P:D i like winter.. but here i meant winter between lovers, which i guess no one likes!

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